Monday, January 24, 2011

Short Story

My short story is about a woman that that is 26 years old. She has a wonderful husband and they live in the city. She has this big problem hanging over her head and does not know how to tell her husband. Nobody knows about this and she wants to tell somebody but she is to scared that her husband will find out. She is hoping everything will turn out okay and it wont ake long to figure the process out.  
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6 comments:

  1. JacquelinLJanuary 25, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    What is your 26 year old like? Is she a friendly person?

    This sounds like a great story! I would really want to read it when its finished. It's so suspenseful!

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  2. Christine CharbonneauJanuary 25, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    Thanks for posting, Meghan! I'm looking forward to finding out your character's secret, and whether or not her husband discovers it.

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  3. siobhan murtaghJanuary 26, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    thanks for the feedback meghan(: i love your idea for your short story.but is she trying to keep it from just her husband or her family and friends to? ..when you finish your story, i would love to read it

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  4. KateSJanuary 27, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Meghan,
    Your story sounds really interesting and i can't wait to find out what her secret is. I'd love to know more about your main character and what her life is like. Does she have kids? What does she do for a job?... things like that. I can't wait to read your finished story!

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  5. Alexa OJanuary 27, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    Meghan
    i really like how you did not give anything away in the summery and you kept it short but i agree with siobhan, is she keeping it from just her husband or her friends and family too?
    i cant wait to read it!

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  6. shawn dFebruary 5, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    this story sounds interesting and it reminds me of a TV show called "Ghost Whisper",......next time if your making this story, can you describe what kind of problem the 26 year old women is having in her personal life

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